Rewrite in our tone

Here is a sample of how we write:

{{sample}}

Rewrite the text below so it sounds like that sample. Keep every fact and every
number. Do not add enthusiasm that was not already there, and do not introduce
words the sample never uses.

Show the rewrite first. Then list the three changes that did the most work, one
line each, so I can apply the same edits myself next time.

{{draft}}

What to fill in

{{sample}}

Voice sample — e.g. Paste two paragraphs that sound like you

{{draft}}

Draft to rewrite — e.g. Paste the text that needs fixing

What it produces

Before: We're thrilled to announce an exciting new feature!
After:  Prompts now sync between your Mac and iPhone.

Changes: cut "thrilled" and "exciting" (the reader decides
what's exciting), replaced the announcement framing with the
fact itself.